Hi Everyone

[bailey]

Hi All....after a break of 20 years or so ive started writing songs again. Heres a link to the first 3 rough demo's ive done...would love some feedback! Ive written performed and recorded all the parts and now need to get into a studio with a drummer and do them properly but thought id get some feedback before I do.
Cheers
Bailey

www.youtube.com/watch?v=xkZ97ONSjxs

[Lee]

Nice work, mate.

Good voice, melody and all round good tune. Stay's a nice little ballad with Long Way Down a much more rockier song, with a nice riff.

Be nice to eventually hear the finished articles.

Good job so far tho, mate. Keep it up

[Dean]

Sounding good fella really like Stay ,

keep up the great work .